Jesse-Ray's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phoenix The Goofy Goober]

3/5

Haha oooh someones stepping on AshfordPrides toes.
This was pretty good, I prefer Ash's but if you insist on the Phoenix Wright I reccomend making it more spontaneous.

fusion-of-flash responds:

Thank you very much for the review and for the tip. Will follow it :)

[Life Factory]

4/5

That was nice concept kind of a metaphor for life defeinetly unique. In regards to quality you should probably spend more time adding detail, depth, shading and more colour variety but for the timeframe was good. You could probably afford to boost the audio quality a bit, it got a bit static and you have plenty of room to do so.

Anyway great work and good luck with future work.

OrigamiNugget responds:

Thanks. Not a lot of people catch on to the sybolism and stuff in this. I'm not going to explain, but i think you get it.

[GoldenEye:The Facility P2]

4/5

Hahah that brings back a few memories thats almost exactly what the stage looks like, it was pretty funny and random but make the next one go longer yeah.

Danny-G responds:

thank you and yeah I'll try to make the next one longer

[Dreamtime Ngilgi Cave]

3/5

Hey a West Aussie, nice.

The flash was pretty good allthough I doubt many newgrounders will be familiar with aboriginal folk lore, it really reminded me of those shorts you get on ABC. your drawing could use a little work and the volume and quality of the voice should be boosted.

All the Best Buddy (I'm from Collie, South of Freo.)

animatorsdelight responds:

Sick!

East Fremantle!!!

[Do not vote for Tom Fulp!]

Grr

This isn't a flash animation, make it a cartoon just so long is it isn't a series of pictures with voiceovers submit that elsewhere.

JMartin97 responds:

I did it all in flash, and recorded it all and put it in flash....then I had to arrange it in flash, recorded my own clips and then put them in flash. If you wanna see my animation check out my other films. If you can't appreciate what this is supposed to be, then I'm sorry...you just don't get it.

[Sin Shity]

3/5

Haha that was pretty funny got a smile on my face, you should kepp on with the series maybe sattire the whole film. Your drawings are ok and the Sin City style looks awse, my only argument is that the audio isn't compressed enough giving it a bigger file size than neccesary.

Funkylikamonkey responds:

Thanks for the review but I find that its better to put quality over file size if it doesnt put it over 5megs. With all of my latest movies the sound has been 128Kbps.
Have a look at my original Sin Shity to get an idea what it would have been with bad sound :D

[A review by Eric Bauman]

Half a thumb up

This essentially was audio with some comments on the side. I like seeing eBaums World being mocked so I was generous in giving this 2 but if you are to remake something like this lip sync it and do something with it, make him move around or anything hey otherwise it's jsut a stream of audio.

2/5

linktwin responds:

I'll make that a priority. I will have it lip synced and with movement. (while keeping the comments :D)

[sketch--3]

Very Nice

I'm currently making a similar flash but as a chalkboard oposed to pencil and paper.
Tell me ,how do you get it to draw a circle like that, I've been slaving over it.
Great flash by the way.

Volatile-exp responds:

to do the circle, i started with a layer and put a circle straight on it, then i animated the pencil going round the circle on seperate keyframes, i then highlighted the frames on the layer with the circle , pressed f6 and on the seperate keyframes, rubbed out the bits that hadn't been drawn yet,

oh and good luck with your flash

[PANDAmonium]

I must say I'm dissapointed.

.... Wheres the Hoff

Holo-Alf responds:

Sorry man! He'll be in the next one, promise!

[Bad Guys Go To Hell]

Shit Yeah!!

Chris Nosal you rock, this series is gonna take a while to get old so make sure you keep em going. One small question "Who are the badguys?"

5/5........ again

ChrisNosal responds:

The bad guys are the ones with the grey bodies who usually hang out in the background.

Although, the main characters can be pretty bad too sometimes.

Thanks.